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she walked by road, with heart full of fears,
her mind was numb, eyes full of tears.
for all the things to him,she ever said,
in hope, that these memory will never fade.
her lonely shadow on beach, she stare,
was once used to be a dancing pair,
the rocks, they sat, for hours, for days
are now getting tanned, by scarlet sun rays.
the wrinkles on the bedspread of night before,
and the shower, which never stopped to pour,
besides her cot lies, his white shirt,
still reminds her of that innocert flirt.
the half ate sandwich, is still on table,
kept besides, an uncorked black label.
the lilies he brought,in a white china vase,
are pale in memories of he who was.
now he is bound, as photo in her diary,
but a ghost that frequenly haunt her memory.
more she tries to forget the dead,
she knows,its a long and lonely road ahead.
she wish, his presence still lingers there,
a dream against His will, she had dare,
a shot and the floor turned red,
here goes lass, to meet her lad.
October 16, 2005 11:17 PM
thnkoo thnkoo :) top
October 17, 2005 11:47 PM
right frm my birth be..wat do u expect frm a jim morrison fan..i started with poetry re ! top
October 18, 2005 11:22 AM
abe tu to poet ban gaya yaar
itna kaam aa gaya kya.... apne PL ka naam aur mail id de .. main ussey baat karta hun... bachey ki jaan le ga kya?? aaj poem likhi haihn kal na jaane kya kya kar guzarey...
jokes apart.. fundoo hain yaar top
October 20, 2005 2:57 AM
nazar-e-inayat aapki sir, jo deewane-e-ghalib ne is nacheez ki ek adna poem ko kaabil-e-taarif samjha :) top
October 20, 2005 8:56 PM
waah ustad waah !
Me buried in work...will not surface so soon . so no posts as of now :( top
October 21, 2005 12:20 AM
@ shankari : thnx :)
and yeah !! get rid of tht damn work..i want few updates thr :) top
October 21, 2005 9:52 PM
sale wo clear indication dene ke liye tha ki those days belongs to kgp life:D top
October 24, 2005 2:33 AM
aye aye sir !! top
October 24, 2005 5:29 AM
oye mote nice poem... tera naam toh ab gaalib rakhna chahiye :) heeheehee top
October 25, 2005 12:08 AM
i m obliged to have +ve comments from such a high profile critic ;) top
October 29, 2005 9:56 PM
Wow, that's great!! I didn't know you were into writing poems & all...
Well this one's really good, and I esp loved these lines:
the rocks, they sat, for hours, for days
are now getting tanned, by scarlet sun rays.
and this last one - BEAUTIFUL:
Here goes lass, to meet her lad. top
October 30, 2005 2:51 AM
thnx ami..
and for poems..woh to bas..aise hi kabhi kabhi :) top